Thursday 5 July 2018

Describing Kim Potroz

Describing: Kim Potroz

In a rather big house just outside of town lives a young annoying teenager and her family.
Kims pointed brown eyes can just be seen hiding under her brown shoulder length hair that covers up her round baby face.Her fat round mouth covers up her gimy yellow teeth.

Kim  is lazy because everytime she is told to do something she will sit on her chair and complain.Kim can be smart when she wants to be but she doesn't put in much efort.Kim is also a (pig) as my family says because she won't just go for second but thirds and fourths.

Everyone who lives near kim knows she tries to hide any homework she has.Anyone who know her know to stay away from her room because she gets home and dumps everything on her floor and she will be seen sitting on her bed playing on her computer and watching tv or listening to music.

Kims mother always tells her to clean her room or she will take her devices away but kim never listens.

By Megan

My Loom Speech

Loom Speech

The Wolf

The Wolf


In the darkness of a gloomy forest is a cave where a lonely mean wolf lived.


The wolf's piercing beady black eyes can be seen as he walks out of his dark cave. His sharp scary yellow teeth can be noticed as he eyes up his pray.


The wolf is known for being a nasty evil cold hearted beast. He tricks people by going up to them and pretending to be their friend.


Everyone who lives in the forest knows the wolf as he is often spending his time to stalk his prey.


The wolf comes from a long-line of cruel and evil beast however he has never been caught for his cruel actions.

By Megan

When I was Writing this piece I was learning how to plan in depth.