Tuesday, 2 April 2019
Camp Moment In Time
Recently in class, we have been doing a moment in time writing. We are doing camp moment in times. For this, I wrote about our sandcastle building competition. Doing this I learned that good writers rewrite their writing multiple time and change it up. This piece was hard because you had to over exaggerate and use a bunch of writing features.
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Awesome writing and some good language... must've learnt from the best 😉😉
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