Describing: Kim Potroz
In a rather big house just outside of town lives a young annoying teenager and her family.
Kims pointed brown eyes can just be seen hiding under her brown shoulder length hair that covers up her round baby face.Her fat round mouth covers up her gimy yellow teeth.
Kim is lazy because everytime she is told to do something she will sit on her chair and complain.Kim can be smart when she wants to be but she doesn't put in much efort.Kim is also a (pig) as my family says because she won't just go for second but thirds and fourths.
Everyone who lives near kim knows she tries to hide any homework she has.Anyone who know her know to stay away from her room because she gets home and dumps everything on her floor and she will be seen sitting on her bed playing on her computer and watching tv or listening to music.
Kims mother always tells her to clean her room or she will take her devices away but kim never listens.
By Megan
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