Thursday, 5 July 2018

The Wolf

The Wolf


In the darkness of a gloomy forest is a cave where a lonely mean wolf lived.


The wolf's piercing beady black eyes can be seen as he walks out of his dark cave. His sharp scary yellow teeth can be noticed as he eyes up his pray.


The wolf is known for being a nasty evil cold hearted beast. He tricks people by going up to them and pretending to be their friend.


Everyone who lives in the forest knows the wolf as he is often spending his time to stalk his prey.


The wolf comes from a long-line of cruel and evil beast however he has never been caught for his cruel actions.

By Megan

When I was Writing this piece I was learning how to plan in depth.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora, I am Theo from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked the way you used heaps of descriptive words.
    You taught me wolfs have black fur.
    How come you just used a wolf.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog
    Mā te wā
    Theo

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